Peter Rabbit and BenJamin found an path to the garden and slid down the roof onto the washing line. They were balancing on the line. Then BenJamin Suddenly fell but peter grabbed him by the earls and pulled him up to safety. Soon unexpect cdly Benjamin was to heavy for peter so peter carry him and so peter fell.
‘’Run this way! ‘’ shouted peter Rabbit as he ran around the garden. Mr Mcgregor was trying to catch the Rabbit. Peter and Benjamin wanted to eat him carrots. Luckily the rabbit escaped under the fence.
‘’Run this way! ‘’ shouted peter Rabbit as he ran around the garden. Mr Mcgregor was trying to catch the Rabbit. Peter and Benjamin wanted to eat him carrots. Luckily the rabbit escaped under the fence.
Malo Kolotita
ReplyDeleteWhat an exciting story about Peter Rabbit and Benjamin. I loved how you described Peter and Benjamin 'balancing on the washing line.' Luckily, they managed to escape. What do you think might have happened if Mr McGregor had caught them eating his carrots?
Another great illustration for your blog post too, Kolotita. Can't wait to see more of your learning from this year. Excellent Work!
From Miss T.A
I like your dog kolotita.
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