Today, at morning tea, I playing at the park. With my fantastic lovely friend legacy. We were talking about the little kids putting lipstick on. After that the bell went we went to class. I felt great.
I really like how you used some adjectives in your writing to make it more interesting. Thank you for a great illustration as well. Please keep writing descriptive stories.
Talofa Kolotita
ReplyDeleteI really like how you used some adjectives in your writing to make it more interesting. Thank you for a great illustration as well. Please keep writing descriptive stories.
From Mrs Vaevae
Kia Ora Kolotita,
ReplyDeleteWe are very impressed with your writing. We liked how you used the adjective lovely.
Kind Regards,
Room 9 Park Estate School